6.05.2010
You're bound to find something you like . . .
"The Summer We Read Gatsby"
5.27.2010
Proof-reading checklist.
- correct formatting (heading, header, margins, etc.)
- correct spelling and consistent tense
- active voice and third person formal language
- correct punctuation usage, especially comma splices
- omit fragments and run-ons and pare down wordy sentences
- smooth transitions between sentences and paragraphs, logical organization of ideas
- correct quotation integration and citation usage
- clear, focused, and concise thesis
- omit any excessive plot summaries
- appropriate length
5.21.2010
Q4, week 8 skedj.
In Class: Quotation integration revisited.
Homework: Continue working on first draft.
Day 2
In Class: Complete full first draft by end of class.
Homework: Self and peer edit.
Day 3
In Class: Writing workshop.
Homework: Complete final draft. Submit via Turn It In before class meets on Friday.
Friday
In Class: TBD.
Homework: Read a few good books, get outside, play, laugh, write, avoid misusing the term "irony," eat popsicles (but not in bed), use Facebook to have a sophisticated and intelligent conversation about something worthwhile, go to a drive-in theater, learn new words, start a band, call a friend from class in the middle of the night and rehearse lines lines from an American Lit book, buy a Slip n' Slide, and support your local lemonade stand. Have other ideas? Post them below.
5.16.2010
Q4, week 7 skedj.
In Class: Filling in the narrative gaps.
Homework: Gatsby ch. 9, pp. 163-180 (18).
Day 2
In Class: Gatsby's funeral.
Homework: Close annotation of last passage.
Day 3
In Class: Final discussion re: last passage. Discuss Gatsby passage analysis essay.
Homework: Close annotation of selected passage.
Friday
In Class: Intro & thesis.
Homework: Begin first draft.
5.13.2010
"ABC" author in town.
5.09.2010
Q4, week 6 skedj.
Monday
In Class: "[Daisy:] The colossal vitality of his illusion."
Homework: Gatsby ch. 6, pp. 97-111 (15).
Day 2
In Class: Inventions and incarnations.
Homework: Gatsby first half of ch. 7, pp. 113-125 (13).
Day 3
In Class: Fitzgerald cranks up the heat. (A shame they didn't have air-conditioning in the 20s.)
Homework:
- Close annotation of "He wanted nothing less of Daisy than that she should go to Tom and say: 'I never loved you'" . . . "But they made no sound and what I almost remembered was uncommunicable forever" (109-111).
- Read second half of ch. 7, pp. 125-145 (21).
In Class: "[A] rotten crowd."
Homework: Gatsby ch. 8, pp. 147-162 (16).
5.08.2010
Keep your books!
5.03.2010
Close annotation for Day 2.
- Nick's house: "I lived at West Egg . . . all for eighty dollars a month" (5).
- Tom & Daisy Buchanan's house: "And so it happened" . . . "with his legs apart on the front porch" (6) and "We walked through a high hallway" . . . "as wind does on the sea" (7-8).
- valley of ashes and the Wilson's garage: "About half way between West Egg and New York" . . . "I first met Tom Buchanan's mistress" (23-24).
Find your passage from the online text of the novel here. Copy and paste it into a Word document. Change the page format to "landscape" (horizontal justification). Fit the passage to no more than one page and be sure that you have enough space in between each line to adequately mark up the passage.
Once you've done your close annotation, address the following questions:
- In what ways does the setting (place, specifically) of your passage reflect the character(s) who occupy it?
- Is it significant that the place is described by Nick and not someone else? Yes. Why? (Consider that narrative point of view is, essentially, a filter through which the reader understands the events of the novel. Consider, too, the way in which Nick is characterized.)
5.02.2010
Q4, week 5 skedj.
In Class: More on characterization.
Homework: Close annotation on setting. (See post above.)
Day 2
In Class: Ch. 1 & 2 close annotations.
Homework: Gatsby ch. 3, pp. 39-59 (21).
Day 3
In Class: Gatsby's party.
Homework: Gatsby ch. 4, pp. 61-80 (20).
Friday
In Class: Back story revealed.
Homework:
- Write a solid paragraph synthesizing the following lines from chapter four:
- “‘I tried very hard to die, but I seemed to bear an enchanted life’” (66).
- “‘Anything can happen now that we’ve slid over this bridge’ . . . Even Gatsby could happen, without any particular wonder” (69).
- “Then it had not been merely the stars to which he had aspired on that June night. He came alive to me, delivered suddenly from the womb of his purposeless splendor” (78).
- Gatsby ch. 5, pp. 81-96 (16).
4.29.2010
4.25.2010
Q4, week 4 skedj.
Monday.
In Class: Block 5: English Dept. candidate lesson. Block 6: Comma splices.
Homework: Their Eyes essay.
Day 2.
In Class: Their Eyes wrap up.
Homework: Their Eyes essay polishing. Proof for:
- agreement of thesis, supporting evidence, and title
- organization of ideas at both sentence and paragraph levels
- wordiness, redundancies, wordiness, word and sentence variety
- quotations integration and citation
- spelling, grammar, and mechanics
- MLA formatting
In Class: Their Eyes Were Watching God, The Great Gatsby, blues, and jazz
Homework: Gatsby ch. 1.
Friday.
In Class: Close passage analysis.
Homework: Ch. 2.
4.22.2010
Summer Opp.
4.20.2010
Reading Tim 'O Brien in Hanoi.
4.18.2010
Q4, week 3 skedj.
Monday.
In Class: Vergible Woods, part two; essay introduction.
Homework: Ch. 16-18, pp. 138-167 (30).
Day 2.
In Class: Mrs. Turner, Motor Boat, et al.
Homework: Ch. 19 & 20, pp. 168-193 (26). Also, generate a final discussion question for student-led discussion. Question must be cumulative in nature and must address the resolution of a particular aspect of the novel, for example, with respect to character, theme, symbol, extended metaphor, etc.
Day 3.
In Class: Open topic graded discussion.
Homework: Afterword, pp. 195-205 (11) and essay thesis and supporting evidence.
Friday.
In Class: Writing day.
Homework: Their Eyes Were Watching God essay. Due next Wednesday via Turn It In.
4.11.2010
Hurston supplements.
The new documentary, Zora's Roots, pays tribute to the most prolific woman writer of the Harlem Renaissance. The film traces Hurston's life and work from her childhood in the all-black township of Eatonville, Florida, to her days as a Barnard student in New York City, to her anthropologic field work in Honduras and Haiti, and eventually back to Florida, where she died penniless and was buried in an unmarked grave.
During the Roaring Twenties, Hurston was central to Harlem's evolving literary scene alongside Langston Hughes and Wallace Thurman. She was Barnard College's first black graduate, and her studies in anthropology contributed to a lifelong exploration of language, culture and the African American experience. More than 40 years after her death in 1960, Hurston's writing remains an integral piece of America's literary fabric. In addition to her novel Their Eyes Were Watching God, which has been cited as one of the 100 greatest literary works of all time, she is renowned for her journalistic, cinematic and non-fiction work.
"Zora['s] courage and determination to look at black culture with an analytical eye enabled her to express so beautifully the richness of the culture, its complex history and diasporic nature." said Barnard English Professor Monica Miller, who appears in the film.
Hurston Plays at the Library of Congress.
The Zora Neale Hurston Plays at the Library of Congress present a selection of ten plays written by Hurston (1891-1960), author, anthropologist, and folklorist. Deposited as typescripts in the United States Copyright Office between 1925 and 1944, most of the plays remained unpublished and unproduced until they were rediscovered in the Copyright Deposit Drama Collection in 1997. The plays reflect Hurston's life experience, travels, and research, especially her study of folklore in the African-American South. Totaling 1,068 images, the scripts are housed in the Library's Manuscript, Music, and Rare Book and Special Collections divisions.
Q4, week 2 skedj.
In Class: Graded, student-led discussion. Topic: Characterization of Joe Starks. Crucial to this will be essential lines/passages and their implications.
Homework: Ch. 6, pp. 50-75 (26).
Day 2.
In Class: Mule stories.
Homework: Ch. 7-9, pp. 76-93 (18).
Day 3.
In Class: "That strange being with huge square-toes."
Homework: Ch. 10-12, pp. 100-115 (16).
Friday.
In Class: Vergible Woods.
Homework: Ch. 13-15, pp. 116-138 (23).
4.10.2010
4.07.2010
A refresher on annotations.
Annotations are notes for the future. They’re how you hold up your end of the conversation with the text. You are expected to annotate—annotations checks can occur at any time, without notice)—but the way in which you do so is up to you. Here are some suggestions:
- Highlight key words, images, and patterns and mark significant passages.
- Flag or ear-mark critically important pages.
- Raise discussion-worthy questions in the margins.
- Draw connections through page number references. (For example, “See page xx.”)
- Write a summary at the end of each chapter. Address questions such as: What happened? How and why? What purpose does the chapter serve? In other words, why does it exist? What is it doing to/for the narrative or text as a whole?
- Keep a list, or index, of important themes, symbols, and motifs on the inside cover of your book. Write corresponding page numbers for each.
A close annotation is when one examines a significant passage (of no more than one page) closely, as if under a microscope. To do so, first retype the passage so that it takes up one complete, double-spaced page in landscape format. Then, mark up the passage by following the directions below.
- look up unknown words.
- circle words that carry considerable weight, have “heft.”
- mark images, symbols, metaphoric language.
- consider denotation (what words mean) and connotation (what words imply).
- consider text (what’s on the page) and subtext (what meanings it may carry).
- Make connections to elsewhere in text.
- Draw conclusions. What statement is being made? By who? What about? What are its thematic or symbolic implications?
4.05.2010
Homework for Day 2: Authentic Dialogue.
Examples of different forms of communication:
- dialogue between friends or family
- writing at school or a journal
- nightly news cast
- online conversations (email, IM, Facebook, etc.)
4.03.2010
Q4, week 1 skedj.
Monday.
In Class: Their Eyes intro and Hurston background; "How it Feels to Be Colored Me."
Homework: Authentic Dialogue. (See post above.)
Day 2.
In Class: Authentic Dialogue.
Homework: Ch. 1 & 2, pp. 1-20 (20).
Day 3.
In Class: "Ships at a distance . . .", Ms. Washburn, and the pear tree.
Homework: Ch. 3 & 4, pp. 21-33 (13).
Friday.
In Class: Logan Killicks and Joe Starks.
Homework: Ch 5, pp. 34-50 (17). Prep for Monday's student-led, graded discussion on the characterization of Joe Starks (essential lines and their implications).
3.14.2010
Q3, week 9 skedj.
In class: Dialogue and subtext in "Hills Like White Elephants."
Homework: Read Flannery O' Connor's "A Good Man Is Hard to Find" with an eye toward context (given the introductory reading).
Day 2.
In class: Southern Gothic and the Grotesque.
Homework: Read first half of Colson Whitehead's "The Gangsters."
Day 3.
In class: Who's the real Misfit?
Homework: Finish "The Gangsters."
Friday.
In class:
Homework: None.
IMPORTANT NOTE: All revisions and any other outstanding work is due by the end of the week, as the quarter three grade book will be closed as of 3:00 p.m. on Friday, March 19.
3.10.2010
Punctuation Challenge.
3.08.2010
MPR's "Talking Volumes" with Sherman Alexie.
Alexie joined Kerri Miller on the stage of the Fitzgerald Theater on Wednesday, Sept. 26, 2007.
Short story unit:
- "What You Pawn I Will Redeem," Sherman Alexie
- "A Pair of Tickets," Amy Tan
- "Cathedral," Raymond Carver
- "Hills Like White Elephants," Ernest Hemingway
- "A Good Man Is Hard to Find," Flannery 'O Connor
- "The Gangsters," Colson Whitehead
- "Sonny's Blues," James Baldwin
- "The Open Boat," Stephen Crane
- "The Gilden Six-Bits," Zora Neale Hurston
- "A Perfect Day for Bananafish," J.D. Salinger
- "In Dreams Begin Responsibilities," Delmore Schwartz
- "Roman Fever," Edith Wharton
3.07.2010
3.06.2010
Speaking of "The Graduate" . . .
Critic's Notebook
AND HERE'S TO YOU
Despite its abject flattery of youth and its sour slander of anyone over thirty-five, Mike Nichols’s “The Graduate” (1967) is still funny. Dustin Hoffman’s virginal panic when the leggy Anne Bancroft methodically bullies him into bed is a classic of mimicry, almost Harold Lloyd-like in its portrayal of courage barely conquering fear of the unknown. What has changed, however, is our perception of Bancroft’s Mrs. Robinson. As Hoffman’s Benjamin gets interested in her pretty but vapid daughter, Elaine (Katherine Ross), Mrs. Robinson becomes a fairy-tale monster. The movie’s view of her is priggish; all she wants, after all, is sex with a nice-looking boy. Yet Bancroft, whose films are on view March 8-11 at the Film Society of Lincoln Center, gives a terrific performance as a bored, frustrated Beverly Hills woman who doesn’t know what to do with her brains. Look at her expression and you see intimations of an entirely justified despair. Mrs. Robinson is the heroine of “The Graduate,” and Bancroft gives the movie its soul. ♦
Q3, week 8 skedj.
In class: Closing discussion on Catcher & The Graduate.
Homework: Read Sherman Alexie's "What You Pawn I Will Redeem" with an eye toward extended metaphor. Optional: Alexie & Louis bios.
Day 2.
In class: Short story as a form; extended metaphor (allegory). Read Adrian C. Louis poems.
Homework: Read Amy Tan's "A Pair of Tickets"with an eye toward setting; prep for graded discussion.
Day 3.
In class: Graded discussion. Prompt: The mother of Jing-mei Woo told her that being Chinese is a matter of genetics. Jing-mei finds that to be true. What is the role of place and time (in other words, history), then, in this story?
Homework: Read Raymond Carver's "Cathedral" with an eye toward characterization.
Friday.
In class: Bringing characters to life on the page.
Homework: Read Ernest Hemingway's "Hills Like White Elephants" with an eye toward dialogue.
2.28.2010
Q3, week 7 skedj.
In class: Writing day.
Homework: Finish Catcher writing assignment.
Day 2.
In class: The Graduate.
Homework: Moodle forum.
Day 3.
In class: The Graduate.
Homework: Catcher/Graduate snapshot.
Friday.
Conferences; no school.
2.21.2010
From The Onion: "Bunch of Phonies Mourn J.D. Salinger"
January 28, 2010 | Issue 46•04
Q3, week 6 skedj.
In class: Kivel; "Comin' through the rye."
Homework: Ch. 24, pp. 235-251 (17).
Day 2.
In class: Mr. Antolini.
Homework: Ch. 25 & 26, pp. 252-277 (26).
Day 3.
In class: Graded discussion: synthesizing Catcher.
Homework: Discussion reflection and get a start on Catcher writing assignment.
Friday.
In class: Writing day.
Homework: Continue to work on Catcher writing assignment. Have a first draft for Monday.
Writing contest.
2.19.2010
Coming thro' the rye.
Coming thro' the rye, poor body,
Coming thro' the rye,
She draiglet a' her petticoatie
Coming thro' the rye.
O, Jenny's a' wat, poor body;
Jenny's seldom dry;
She draiglet a' her petticoatie
Coming thro' the rye.
Gin a body meet a body
Coming thro' the rye,
Gin a body kiss a body—
Need a body cry?
Gin a body meet a body
Coming thro' the glen,
Gin a body kiss a body—
Need the warld ken?
2.16.2010
Q3, week 5 skedj.
Day 1.
In class: Close readings.
Homework: Ch. 18 & 19, pp. 175-193 (19).
Day 2.
In class: Holden's musings on Jesus, war, sex, and psychoanalysis.
Homework: Ch. 20 & 21, pp. 194-215 (22).
Friday.
In class: Open topic graded discussion.
Homework: Ch. 22 & 23, pp. 216-234 (19) and Paul Kivel article, "Young White Men."
2.09.2010
A modern Norman Bowker, but with a better ending.
From Minnesota Public Radio:
Duluth, Minn. — More than 1.6 million U.S. troops have deployed to Iraq and Afghanistan since 2001. The Defense Department estimates that up to 20 percent of them suffer from post-traumatic stress disorder or major depression. The "thousand-yard stare," shell shock, combat fatigue. PTSD has had many names throughout history. Many returning veterans find ways to cope. Some get help, and many recover. Here is one Minnesota man's story of PTSD. Listen to the full segment below.
2.06.2010
Q3, week 4 skedj.
In class: "You'd like her. . . . I swear to God you'd like her."
Homework: Ch. 11 & 12, pp. 99-114 (16).
Day 2.
In class: "Jane on the brain again" and "People are always ruining things for you."
Homework: Ch. 13 & 14, pp. 115-136 (22).
Day 3.
In class: Open topic graded discussion.
Homework: Ch. 15-17, pp. 137-174 (38!).
Friday.
School for me; no school for you.
2.03.2010
Re: Friday.
You will be assessed based on only two criteria, the extent to which you:
- Engage in a full, balanced discussion. Every voice must be heard multiple times.
- Offer connections, conclusions based on a close reading of the text. Your books must be in hand and open with your eyes in them. Pursue meaning with relentless verve and rigor. Page numbers are crucial.
2.01.2010
About the author, J.D. Salinger.
January 1, 1919 - January 27, 2010
- Biography.
- Obituaries & other posthumous reflections: New York Times, Associated Press, The New Yorker.
- Audio essays: "J.D. Salinger Remembered", "What Salinger Mean To Me", "Meeting J.D. Salinger", and "Rest in Privacy".
- New York Times archives: news and reviews.
- BBC News: "A Glimpse Inside the Life of a Recluse."
- New York Review of Books: "Justice to J.D. Salinger."
- Time Magazine: "All-Time 100 Novels."
Q2, week 3 skedj.
In class: Vignette showcase and HMS wrap up.
Homework: Begin Catcher in the Rye, chapters 1 & 2, pp. 3-21 (19).
Day 2.
In class: Narrative voice and tone.
Homework: Catcher ch. 3 & 4, pp. 22-45 (24).
Day 3.
In class: I could tell you what we're going to do today, but "I'm not in the mood right now."
Homework: Catcher ch. 5-7, pp. 46-68 (23).
Friday.
In class: Graded discussion. Topics: 1) Stradlater's composition and/or 2) "So damn lonesome."
Homework: Catcher ch. 8-10, pp. 69-98 (30).
1.30.2010
Weekend homework.
1.26.2010
Cisneros on "Talking Volumes."
Listen here:
1.25.2010
Coming-of-death musing.
1.24.2010
Q3, week 2 skedj.
On memoir.
1.23.2010
An announcement from FLASH.
If you write poems, stories, or thought pieces--either for class or leisure--please send Word documents to FLASH at flash@blakeschool.org. Every submission gets a note with respectful feedback from our board of editors.
Congrats to the editorial board, who is made up of the following students: Heather Pearson, Babs Laco, Emily Wells, Kate Abram, Krista Rud, Frieda Yeung, Alex Beard, Annabel Cater, Emma Woodsworth, and Masha Berman. At the last meeting on January 15, the board elected Jacqui Crane, Carolyn Winslow, and Shaina Rud as editors-in-chief. Congrats to them as well.
This next week, FLASH is having a poetry contest. Winners get Chipotle gift certificates; hence, it's a Chipoetry contest! Again, email submissions as Word documents to flash@blakeschool.org.
1.22.2010
1.21.2010
Mango in the news.
- Cisneros critical of Chicago despite Mayor Daley's praise of Mango St.
- "The Story Teller," adapted from the introduction to the recently published 25th Anniversary Edition of The House on Mango Street.
- And this, from a while back: A San Antonio Journal article about an uproar over Cisneros' house paint selection: "Novelist's Purple Palette is Not to Everyone's Taste."
1.19.2010
Q3, week 1 skedj.
MLK Day; no school.
Day 2.
In class: Intro to House on Mango Street and vignettes.
Homework: HMS introduction and pp. 3-13.
Day 3.
In class: Vignette study.
Homework: HMS pp. 14-38 (25).
Friday.
In class: Like, like, like . . .
Homework: Using one of your journal prompts, or starting a new one, write a vignette of no more than 250 words (typed, double-spaced) that addresses a personal experience of yours. Use poetic language with intention. This might include imagery (sensory details), figurative language (metaphor, simile, symbol), or repetition of words or sounds (alliteration, consonance, assonance, anaphora). Finally, give your vignette an appropriate, creative title. I'll take a hard copy.
1.11.2010
Q2, week 9 skedj.
In class: Finish Vietnam films critique.
Homework: All missing work needs to be in by Thursday. Bring House on Mango Street beginning next week.
Wednesday & Thursday.
Project Days.
Friday.
Grade Activities Day.
1.03.2010
The Year in Language.
Q2, week 8 skedj.
Monday - Friday.
In class: Vietnam films critique.
Homework: TTC essay: A Soldier's Baggage, due before class on Friday via Turn It In.